Reason for stopping: need a setting! And also, the MC won’t tell me her name.
Ayish, setting is usually one of the few things I don’t struggle with, but this story doesn’t want to be pinned down. And yet, it needs to be, even if it’s about to move into a secondary world where I can do anything I want. And yet, the primary world setting is important. Must sleep on it. Sleep fixes everything!
Now, if only Ms. MC would tell me her name…